Friday, 19 June 2009

I've just re-read the poem. Good God woman call yourself a poet, better stick to mops dear:( Bugger.

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

As they would say in dem mountains of my land..nuthin' wrong with dem type words. Real purty.

In real language - nice little harmless poem to the sun. Nothing wrong.

Jerry from the West Coast.

Gloria Horsehound said...

Well thanks for that darling as we Essex sorts say.

But for someone who has written some quite good stuff this poem was not up to standard. Having a bad word day I expect:(

Am loving your comments Jerry.